Poor Imp

Comma after 'ache'. The final three lines (starting with 'life was never good for her') does not flow as well as the begining. Also, what's with the big font? Ruby: ...

Oh dear God, my spleen died... Something like that, yes. #_# But no, Clau - as far as form, you can use square brackets (these = [ ]). ^_^ There's ...

Meep's question: Ha. Never? Er, hey, the truth - really. Or it could be, right? -Tov Two weeks ago, after Aleda... Hell, I was drunk and Tov had been talking ...

A good friend. Right? Bloody hell. Ah, death is when you're dead, bloody on the concrete and you've got some idiot skinner's bullet in your head and you can't run ...

No one would need a spring-cleaning, of course. What if life were proven to be nonexistent?

Hullo WD. I did say I'd get to commenting on this, if at all possible. It's thick, on more level than one with no implication of dense in the idiotic ...

Imp would go mad, having the questions half-formed but incapable of existence caught in her mind and in her scattered notes. What if skyscrapers were built on a slant?

Granted...but you possessing so much money, despite good intention and good actions, puts the world out of its natural order and in the end, chaos breaks because of the mistaken ...

A hard-nosed, often ill but never pausing to be well, fencing coach - rather pretty but gaunt and dull-eyed from too much work. Her mother was French, but her father ...

Quite apparently, a drunk who was colour-blind mistook their shade and their size and called them grapes when he was thinking of wine. Why is pattern a possible synonym for ...

I wouldn't. Hey - that would be stupid, right? -Tov I'd risk my life for someone, for people. It sounds mad, dio mio - even for Tov. Only I don't ...

A biography of some either tragic theatrical character, or one of a comic who turns out to be quite tragic. If not specifically that, I get the impression of a ...

Clife sounds rather like Clive, I suppose - my first thought tends towards a mother with a lisp trying to say the latter and getting the former. So that, in ...

Tempted? Er, hey - you have to not do something to be tempted by it, right? If you do it, doesn't count. -Tov I won't say the damn word. It's ...

Granted...but Imp returns late in the night and works for four hours on back-ordered critiques, ending with some hundreds more points by dawn. ^_^ I wish I had tournaments more ...